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I'll Wait For You

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IT'S SO PURPLE!!!
DON'T ZOOM IN THOUGH XD

One of the saddest relationships in Warriors... I felt so so bad for Jayfeather. She was the only cat he loved enough to maybe be a mate, and it was snatched away from him. "I'll wait for you forever, Jay's Wing..."  I was sobbing at that point
Eh... for some reason I'm not happy with this. I could have definitely done better. Also, I know Half Moon doesn't have tabby stripes, but I always imagined her with faint ones, so there. :dummy: 
*sigh* I'm going to bed... today's been hard.

I hope you guys enjoy the PURPLENESS! <33

Characters (c) Erin Hunter
Art (c) Me 
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I just had to critique this 0u0
The piece overall is great, but maybe you could have included their pelt colours? I know it'd totally mess up the glorious purpleness, but only faint traces I guess XD

The pose, background and concept are glorious :0! This is definitely an original piece.

Technique is overall good, but the outlines are a little weird. The background could use some sharpening, too, but you still did better than I ever could :3:

The final impact of this piece is amazing, sad, and it makes me want to reread the series and just give lil' Jay bby a hug :0:
Great work C:!!